Sunday, April 1, 2018

A Free Gift After A Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lo! A spectrum of colours
in the misty cerulean sky
God's benevolent gift
graciously bestowed
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Valsa George
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Aniruddha Pathak 06 January 2020

A pot of gold as if inviting, O come on the clouds' wings, Come rob me, lovely style.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 April 2018

One fine Sunday in spring when it 's time of rejoicing as it commemorates the Resurrection of Jesus, reminds us heavens brighter in all the brightness of rainbow as our hearts are overwhelmed with hope and joy! .....Valsa......this is outstanding and so excellently scripted.........10+++++++

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Savita Tyagi 08 April 2018

Beautiful poem Valsa. Fills my heart with joy. Thanks for sharing.

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Nudershada Cabanes 08 April 2018

A rainbow is a message of hope that brings cheer to the hearts after every storm. Beautifully penned Valsa.10

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Glen Kappy 07 April 2018

I like the celebration in this, Valsa. And I fail to think of how or when this sign can cease to make us wonder. -Glen

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 April 2018

Hope and glory appear in your poem like the rainbow that joins earth and the sky. Nice message delivered on a auspicious day.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 April 2018

A stunning write worthy of Easter. The rainbow is truly a visual gift that generates so much emotion and gives us so much joy and hope. Lovely word choice that uplifts the reader. Thank you Valsa.10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2018

I am sorry for the typos! Please read it as 'comfort'

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Valsa George 03 April 2018

I knew it was typo.....!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2018

It's a beautiful poem on the auspicious eve of Easter! wish you belated Easter! These kind of poems comforts my poetic soul!

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Mihaela Pirjol 02 April 2018

This is a poem of stunning poetic beauty as the rainbow itself! Happy Easter, dear Valsa!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 01 April 2018

a beautiful poem of good imagery.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

The misty cerulean sky has brought up a spectrum of colour and this is definitely this rainbow of mercy. God's grace we get through this. Nature's lovely poem is written on Earth and this Easter has motivated mind. Riding the wind we want to reach up to golden heaven of God. This poem is very tender and outstanding one...10

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Nature's lovely poem painted in the sky and its nice to drown in its magic spell..well penned

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 April 2018

Valsa, such a splendid poem👍👍👍

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Loke Kok Yee 01 April 2018

After the rain, we are sometimes treated to the sight of a rainbow. I have not seen one for quite awhile but you have put it in front of me with your eloquent poem. Thanks Valsa.

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Indira Renganathan 01 April 2018

Wonderful....nature always indicates its presage and blessings on us by sudden heavenly soothing showers...be it festivals or rituals or godly birth or demise....today it is Easter... the blessing indicator is the rain and the gift is the rainbow....your poem gives immense joy to me as much as your joy you get watching the rainbow in real.....beautiful craft

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Valsa George 01 April 2018

Love your beautiful comment Indira madam! Thanks a lot!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 April 2018

Happy Easter to you and your family. It's wonderful poem on rainbow, perhaps God's joy on the Easter.

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