Sunday, June 13, 2004

A Frank Discussion Comments

Rating: 4.1

Here is the serenity:
it fell out as we entered the cab

Here is the loyalty:
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Jimi Doyle
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Hazel Durham 15 March 2014

Original with great lines, I really liked this lovely write!

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Pilar Mogollon 14 July 2008

ah sweet, i like the visual.

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Joscephine Gomez 12 May 2007

Beautiful! The style of expression sounds original to me.

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Susan Bagley 02 December 2006

another nice one........... Smiles :) SusanB

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Zinc Truism 06 April 2005

Very nice indeed. Lovely, striking ending. Consider cutting it, though. You'd get the same effect in half the verses.

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