Tuesday, June 6, 2006

A Fragile Soul Comments

Rating: 3.8

Life is joyous and content
Until I face that moment.
When an innocent or deliberate act
Wounds me with its impact.
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Mahfooz Ali
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David Harris 16 March 2007

Mahfooz, you may think you are a fragile soul, but as a writer my friend you are first class all the way. The flow of this poems is truly beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing it. David

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Nalini Hebbar 05 July 2006

after monkeys and elephants...this is a great poem...lovely flow...nalini

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Aashish Ameya 07 June 2006

good one mehfooz..keep writing

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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