Tuesday, August 28, 2007

A Fractured Soul Comments

Rating: 4.6

Did you ever get so weary
That you think you can’t go on?
You reach inside yourself
To find a part that may be strong?
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Marilyn Lott
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 December 2009

This is a beautiful poem with a 'Lotts' of healing and consoling effects and aspects. Thanks Marilyn. Best Regards. Naseer

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Nikunj Sharma 25 November 2009

from a poetess who writes a LOTT See now, what you got! ! ! Words of wisdom and patience With her simple words and common sense.. Go and play at leisure.... U know God's there, shall take care of fracture...

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Ranjit Ravindran 28 September 2009

I liked the title: 'A Fractured Soul', wisely choosen! I bet every one on the face of this earth needs this advice at some point in their life. A sweet 10

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Mamta Agarwal 13 May 2009

very spiritual poem, we have all been there and find eventually He alone is by your side.10+ Mamta

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Thad Wilk 30 March 2009

Wonderfully expressed Marilyn! God IS everyone's friend! He is everywhere, He always there. On the Lord you can depend... Best wishes! *10*! Friend Thad

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Diane Montemayor 18 February 2009

Ma'am, I pray that my fractured soul be healed. Thanks

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Kesav Easwaran 15 February 2009

God is a willing friend..true words...but as you said well, the responsibility willing, to reach him out is vested in us...good meaningful poem, Marilyn...10

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Ted Sheridan 29 August 2007

Thanks, I'm there right now...trying to get out of the muck but my feet seem stuck

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