Quite out of place within the bustle,
trying hard to cross the road.
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A slender dog that once was wild, in town so out of place. Thank goodness it was not a child, words uttered by a passer-by, Foxes and vixens still cherish your sweet sixteen memories in London.They come out every night to find Ann Beard.
Ann: Wonderful, is all I can say! A fellow fox lover. Adeline
Like this, very much. Agree with Fay's comments and... and as he hurried on he smiled. I felt a chill and heaved a sigh. a reaction to a heartless attitude....................10
I like this a lot, Ann....Your meticulous application of detail allows the reader to place themselves within the body of your poem....Mellifluous structuring...Stellar work, indeed, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__
A very moving poem Ann yet beautifully written. Best wishes, Andrew
i can only agree with everyone else fantastic write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, justice part 2.