Wednesday, December 13, 2006

A Four Letter Word For Regret (A Love Poem For Someone I Don'T Love) Comments

Rating: 4.5

You nervous laughter, It refrains
If for one second it ended, I’d surely go insane
And nothing that’s passed the stars has inspired me before
Till’ I saw a robin passing around the glow
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Ray Mesa
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Shala Renee 27 December 2006

we both like the poem alot... there was alot of feeling... it sonded like you put alot of time into it.... you kept me interested....it makes complete sense...you scored and easy 10! -tiffany and shala

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Dwayna Avery 13 December 2006

Great Poem. Keep up the good work. I gave you a 10

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