Saturday, October 20, 2012

A Fountain Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fountain there is for
you, there is a fountain.
It can't be stopped,
can't be, by any mountain.
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Neela Nath Das
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

WOW...this is great! unique and very well done...

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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

excellent write. to be rich not by bread or by eartgly gain by love's silken thread. nice

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A true mind without hypocrisy alone can create a passion of the magnitude that stands before the reverses of indifference and denials. As you raise your fortress of love, the storms unlashed by the belligerents turn weak. A good and powerful write with your stamp!

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Karen Sinclair 21 October 2012

Absolutely gorgeous! this touched me in its two separate lines, one you caring for someone very deeply and one your battle against the unseen ones who you both stand against... truly lovely in how much willingness and enthusiasm you offer yourself as a protector... i do hope i understand this properly...tyvm karen

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