Sunday, September 13, 2009

A Forty-Year-Old Virgin Comments

Rating: 5.0

She stood well out from the crowd
a brown paper bag over her head
with four holes cut out
for her eyes, nose and mouth.
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This was such an unusual poem, it had me mystified until I grasped the meaning at the end. It has a wonderful message, and I just love happy ever afters......10 love Karin

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Alison Cassidy 17 September 2009

Your brilliant final line is the cherry on the top of this wonderful story. I was entranced from the first line to the last. Congratulations on a spellbinding 21st Century fairy tale. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Carol Gall 14 September 2009

beatiful lesson in a wonderful poem david its great 10

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Tsira Goge 14 September 2009

Very beautiful and lovely poem...10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Tai Chi Italy 13 September 2009

Beautiful! lol Smiling at you, knowing you would never let me down! Tai

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David Harris

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