Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
Saturday, September 9, 2017

A Forts And Hills Moon Comments

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Phoenixes fly down on the Chinese parasol branches, several poems
Orioles sound in the smoky willows, one screen of painting
At the horizon, hanging a Forts and Hills Moon
In the heart, filling the comrade-in-arms feelings
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Denis Mair 10 September 2017

The phoenixes are landing on the parasol trees. Those auspicious birds are choosy about where they land, so I think maybe it indicates that your poems are full of inspiration these days. I like the phrase FORTS AND HILLS MOON. It instantly creates a picture. Since you can describe the moon that way, I think there are many other picturesque ways you could describe the moon, but FORTS AND HILLS MOON is especially evocative. I remember seeing it in a Tang poem.

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Luo Zhihai

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Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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