A Forsaken Text Comments

you can never argue that this one is very poetic!

my dear Ahmed your writing to me is very lyrical, but not being religious can not appreciate its full value. (By the way I can't pick up any of your messages.)

a very nice piece..expressing religious words..

Good flow good write strong

It is very poetic. My friend. Hope that you are really happy then

Really do like your style of writing, you know how to use your words! ! ! ! ! !

A great text! Congrats on the fine write!

Thanks for sharing this with us, keep writing. Thanksgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

what an amazing poem! finely written.

loved the flow of the poem; it was in and out with rhyming but made it fun to read. also, love the last stanza. don't really know what more to add since i liked everything about the poem and can't really comment on every thing that was there. your style of writing once again amazes me. loved it lots. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

The lamb, the guard, who is the recipient. Such flowery words very well written as with yr work a sense of mystery well laced with passion.

You provide some interesting pictures and thoughts.

An excellent piece, Ahmad. An enjoyable read. Thanks Richard

That poem is excelent

that was great dear friend enjoyed it so much. thanks for sharing 10

Graciously written and a balanced richness in every precious word. Keep on writing.10..

A poem that is both symbolic and meaningful - good write Ahmad 10

a write of imaginative thoughts about the environment..well penned..

What a life lovely it will be intertwined with loving nature! Good write!

wow.. this is an immense piece. nicely done