Sunday, June 9, 2013

A Form Of Sea Way Comments

Rating: 4.0

sea​​, makes me become a wanderer
like the wind
crossed the doubt and the hope
then lay for a seconds
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adheez van der beanthz
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Shania K. Younce 25 May 2014

You know I was just thinking about the sea when I came across your poem. Very good poem. Bien!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2014

nature a great teacher indeed, be with and then you be...lovely wonderful thanks

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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

A very lovely poem. I like it a lot. Bien!

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Savita Tyagi 25 March 2014

A very beautiful poem with excellent imagery. Vast sea connects us with our other half! So apt.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 26 August 2013

This is most beautiful - you've perfected the imagery

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Beach Girl 14 August 2013

Such a beautiful poem about the sea! Watching the waves is like communicating with a living thing. It tells us so much about ourselves and inspires us to become more than we are.

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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good poem about the sea. sea, where I became a man met the meaning of creation so I can guide the other me.

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Leorne Adile 30 July 2013

this one I like... and I've never been to the sea before.

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Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

The sea can either be a place of serenity with the calming effect of the water that flows and on the other hand it can be a terrible force to be reckoned with when the wind stirs up the waves and lashes it against the rocks. So is it like the emotions of mankind. Sometimes calm and at times contrary. I have two poems that coincides with yours An Angry Sea and Emotions.

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Owain Glyn 12 June 2013

Excellent imagery, the sea is in a constant state of flux, as are we.

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David Wood 11 June 2013

Restless as the sea which is untamed yet orderly with ebbs and flows. A nice poem

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