Wednesday, March 31, 2010

A Forgotten Love Comments

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A forgotten love is the love of God
That was given for us
Uncomditional
But the human beings don't seem to appreciate
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 20 June 2014

A lot of truth in this short write. We do tend to forget the love of the important one as we rush through our hectic days.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 31 March 2010

Be original in your title choices - you copy titles from other writers! ! ! ! ! ! 'A Love Yet Forgotten' (K. Garner) - 'A Forgotten Love' (yours) 'Lies Cover Up' (C. Buhain) - 'I Covered Up My Lies' (yours) 'he's gone again' (A. O'Connor) - 'She's Gone Again' (yours) The Catchers of Dreams' (K.Garner) - 'The Catchers of My Dreams' (yours)

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