Friday, July 24, 2020

A Forgotten Friend Comments

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My present friend is a dependent on electric supply,
And when the energy crisis stopped flow of electrons,
My key board left me alone and helpless, to cry and cry,
Someone whispered from my neutron and protons,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2020

Words sang, lines danced, my pen is still a creator of art. Old ignored forgotten friends do not have long memories, Always ready to brew beer of love even in buried breweries! THOUGHT YOU REFEREED This to me PPME

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me poet yeps poet 31 July 2020

MY photo DISAPPEARED ON SITE WILL COME BACK SAYS NEXT TIME sirrrrrrrrrrr ILIKE YOUR POEM JA Ji GOOD pOEMs only

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me poet yeps poet 31 July 2020

Sir JA ji age catching YOU or you CATCHING AGE NOT READING, WRITING WRITING NO MEANING a Forgotten Friend ME Site NOT working COVID-19 Affected IT ME you Next LIFE TOGETHER DANCING NU DE ALL SAY BOTH Good in WRITING

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 July 2020

A very lovely poem. A friend will always be a friend even forgotten unless he has done something wrong that will terminate the friendship. A heartwarming write beautifully written.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 July 2020

An excellent poem sir! Appreciated the admired.......10++++++

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