Wednesday, February 20, 2008

A Forever Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

His tender head upon my shoulder
My arms holding the greatest gift
My heart filled ….. complete
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Patricia Gale
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Of course - they are sent to bless us! The love is insurmountable. Your poem is warm and fuzzy and huggy and so so precious. Karin Anderson

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Harry Couchon Jr 20 April 2008

Patricia you captured the very spirit of parenthood and grandparenthood in this piece I can't wait untill I wikl be holding my grandchild in my arms

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Chuck Audette 12 March 2008

such sweet sentiments! lovely. -c

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How absolutely divine, P. t x

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Broken Peaces 21 February 2008

Brightened up my morning Patricia thankyou a lovely read after scouring though some really depressive writting the sad thing is half of them are teenagers have'nt even lived yet, brilliant 10 x Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 February 2008

That's just beautiful Patricia, you can feel the love in every word... Andy x 10

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Thad Wilk 20 February 2008

Beautiful poem and tribute your grandson! ! A real pleasure to read Patricia! ! ! *10*! ! Best Wishes Friend Thad

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