November mist wraps a wet blanket
as I walk the falling day's labyrinth
beneath neuronic trees of a waking forest
along a river dying in hyacinth!
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Beautiful images come to the mind's eye while reading this.It creates a bit of longing, but I'm not sure what for.
A beautiful writing of the event in river and boatman's story and likes very much.
The boatman is singing a boat going song is really beautiful a forest by the river. Excellent composition.
A familiar rural scene with a pinch of dreadfulness, at once pleasant and a little frightening too! With the fall of dusk, being in an unfamiliar place, close to the woods is alarming for any one! Shared this mixed experience!