Thursday, November 26, 2009

A Foreign Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gunner on top the pill box
Patiently awaiting your arrival
He seeks to take you out in one fell swoop
Taking your life for his own will
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Robbie Squires
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Chitra - 29 November 2009

a novel theme, well treated. a 10+ for it!

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Dean ....... 26 November 2009

This is my type of poem, tells a story! I liked the BALANCE and the wording, very good!

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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