Bright moon was here,
Before a sandy lies
After the lips of hatred
Telling aloud
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I think i have never commented here for any of your poem. This is our first meeting. I feel very tiny to comment on your write who is highly skilled and much talented. Here you have deeply expressed your emotions. Thanks so much. Regards.
do not feel about lost you will gain wha you lost some day it will be yours the whole world thanks au
In life, it's inevitable, but may we learn from every foolish step. Food for thought. Thanks Malaya.
Mislaid the same moon was the start and you convey what everybody seems to do and take a wrong step which seems in the poem to lead down the drain, a gamble fine write...regards
Just re-read your great work. Five star rating.