Thursday, July 28, 2011

A Foolish Step Comments

Rating: 3.9

Bright moon was here,
Before a sandy lies
After the lips of hatred
Telling aloud
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Luz Hanaii 17 January 2021

Just re-read your great work. Five star rating.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 December 2019

beautiful and imaginative writings

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Luz Hanaii 03 September 2018

Your poems always touch a cord with me. Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 07 June 2018

Foolishness is the root of wrong step. A wise ride.

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Ramesh Rai 11 April 2015

I think i have never commented here for any of your poem. This is our first meeting. I feel very tiny to comment on your write who is highly skilled and much talented. Here you have deeply expressed your emotions. Thanks so much. Regards.

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David Wood 22 April 2013

A lovely poem that is also very true. A good write.

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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 November 2012

do not feel about lost you will gain wha you lost some day it will be yours the whole world thanks au

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Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

In life, it's inevitable, but may we learn from every foolish step. Food for thought. Thanks Malaya.

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Vipins Puthooran 27 April 2012

such a fantastic poem for me, , , top marks

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Dave Walker 29 March 2012

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Ken E Hall 25 August 2011

Mislaid the same moon was the start and you convey what everybody seems to do and take a wrong step which seems in the poem to lead down the drain, a gamble fine write...regards

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