Saturday, April 4, 2015

A Fool's Mistake Comments

Rating: 4.5

'Don't cut yourself on
The pieces of my
Broken heart, '
She said.
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Alyx Hodgin
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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2015

A haunting but well written poem, Alyx. Thanks for sharing

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 April 2015

Oh noh this was remorseful and has a melancholic ending and expresses the remorse well. Kudos for the emotive touches and style that builds up the dramatic perhaps real life scenes. Hope it is out of imagination eh. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. .......

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Chinedu Dike 04 April 2015

Tragedy in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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