'Don't cut yourself on
The pieces of my
Broken heart, '
She said.
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Oh noh this was remorseful and has a melancholic ending and expresses the remorse well. Kudos for the emotive touches and style that builds up the dramatic perhaps real life scenes. Hope it is out of imagination eh. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. .......
Tragedy in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A haunting but well written poem, Alyx. Thanks for sharing