A Fool Of Love Comments

my love will say yes after I die and follow my spirit to the sky enjoyed

My love will say yes after I die, ..........a total punishment, as the crow says refusing your own wedding day, the best time to fell love is to love when its tough but remember the finishing line a beginning of another race, keep on telling us Dickson

Good write. Hmm.. birthdays.. The happy ones are only those I had as a child..sad poem, I like it much, also I love the crow, its fun to see a crow to outsmart the humans again.Thank you for share,10

Well said here...fools do fall in love only.

Nice its Imagery and metaphor. At the same time profound pain misguiding the poetic nature perhaps. Death or the essence of dying so takes so high hand to subside the real problem beneath all such loud cry. Crow is very mysterious in character, a large number of people think on the surface that this bird has a prophetic view and know about the world beyond our death. Thank you the man of love. Regards, pranab

Good poem, good rhymes. Well written. A heart broken day. A dropp of water under the knee. Every problem, every obstacle, a lesson can be Emotions of love refused can be very strong A fool of love for a day, but don't let it last too long Every set back in our life perhaps can mean that God has for us a more glorious plan. Thought provoking poem. Keep writing poetry. you have real talent.