Wednesday, November 9, 2011

A Fool In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the silence that follows after you've left,
I search once again for the words left behind.
Stealing a heart must also be called theft,
if it's love that blows your mind.
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Jacqui Broad
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Stefanie Fontker 09 November 2011

A lover is a fool in love, and a fool in love is a lover indeed. Love corrupts logic, but feeds creativity. Lovely write.

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Crimson Love 09 November 2011

We are all fools when it comes to love, no? 'Stealing a heart must also be called theft' Immaculate lines. Truly a Phenomenal poem.

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Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

Your outspoken words in the poem are echoing in my ears and heart. Your poetic syle like Kamala Das (Classical poetess) . I like to read these line again and again... 'A fool in love can be called a hero - falling from the top, down to zero...' Heart aches when we miss our life. I can see your broken heart. Don't worry, Life is big garden to walk. sometime people may rock your heart...... An amazing and heartrending poem by Jacqui.... Kudos! 10+++++++++++

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