They say that life is short in its span,
So go with the world if it’d change,
But I am not an adjustable spanner,
To change with people in every aspect and manner
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I like the way you have come up with the theme of the poem. Great work but i think in a poem if you are rhyming stuff then the whole poem should be equally rhymed. It shouldnt be like one rhyme here and there and in other stanzas no rhyme. Maybe You Could Check That. Anyways Great Work! Really Loved The Message Of The Poem: D
But someday, the world will know it’s a fool being made, By money and gold in a million ways This sums up the theme of the poem. Good conclusion.