Monday, April 6, 2015

A Foetus Mourns Comments

Rating: 5.0

A small bit of flesh sticking on to the womb.
Growing and getting the shape of a tadpole, an ape
Emerging technology lettting mother watch her child
Growing inside her womb
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Rakhi Jayashankar
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2015

Great piece of work! With a purpose, we are all in this world.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 April 2015

Great and moving. You have presented the case of the unfortunate foetus in very powerful words. (10)

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Rakhi Jayashankar 12 April 2015

thank you sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2015

I too want to live I too want to exist oh lord! ! take me away from this bedeviled womb.......Yes foetus has life and he or she wants to survive. We must not kill him or her. Very nicely and aptly presented. Wonderful imagery. Many thanks. .....10

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2015

So many people long to have a child and so many others throw that gift away. Great poem, Rakhi. Thanks for sharing

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