Friday, August 28, 2009

A Focus On Grinning ‘no’ And ‘yeah’ Comments

Rating: 4.6

No…..... is not NO therefore
No……. hide the YES to extract more
No……. is evener that chance fifty-fifty
No……. is a sweet hurdle to win a kiss nifty!
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sarwar chowdhury
COMMENTS
Rehana Nazli 16 September 2009

A good sense of humour that your poem conveys. yes and no! I like how you try to play with repeatition of words in a fun way.

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Lynda Robson 02 September 2009

Good interactive piece, well composed by you, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 August 2009

Hey cool one Sarwar! ! ! I don't know how you write these things... Very interesting to read.. You are in a league of your own! ! ! no can write these kinda stuff.. very interesting and extremely readable..10++ cheers shan

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Sanjib Das 30 August 2009

OH! WHAT A POEM. I CAN'T IMAGINE YOU WRITE SO WELL..

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 30 August 2009

The hardest 'no' is silent. 'Pluck me pluck me - said magnolia' well..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 August 2009

The dialogue 'No' and 'Yes' is quite interesting through out.

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Ency Bearis 30 August 2009

Interesting poem and a very nice observation..a substantial write...10

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Mamta Agarwal 30 August 2009

smart observation presented tongue in cheek. one has to have perceptive and sensitive antennas to recieve and make sense of mixed signals. very clever and skillful Sarwar,10++ Mamta

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2009

Quite interesting poem. Beautifully written. Also juicy poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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Lady Grace 30 August 2009

a no is no...a yes is a yes..

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Bob Blackwell 30 August 2009

There can be a compromise between the No and Yes...this can bring peace. Interesting poem.

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Omar Ibrahim 30 August 2009

impressive and wonderful rhyming....fantastic keep it up..

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Seema Aarella 30 August 2009

quite an interesting thesies......neatly executed! ! !

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rago rago 29 August 2009

very very nice to read........and yu have done it beautifully....

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Sonya Florentino 29 August 2009

when no means yes and yes means no, and yeah means maybe? who wouldn't go crazy? you are a comedian!

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Surya . 29 August 2009

yeah you are right.rhis one is beautiful and juicy one.. a 10+++ from me surya

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 August 2009

Ya this write is in a juicy tone. No and yes will dance with hand in hand. But this no and yes tale as much more to say. Wish to see you even cover that tale of philosophy. Nice theme with memorable composition.

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Sandra Martyres 29 August 2009

The Yes No Dilemma very well depicted in this truly original poem...10

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

you have a very creative mind my friend..nicely done and you have just told a woman's exceptional way of saying no and yes in different occassion..........10+++++

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What a clever and witty and creative poet you are sarwar, always bringing us something different to think about and enjoy! You have the 'game sewn up'! First no, I know sweeter than yeah! Pluck me pluck me - said Magnolia! Wonderful! 10 love Karin

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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