Tuesday, August 9, 2016

A Flying Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.7

She flies from petals to petals,
In a twinkling of the poetic eyes
Like a gymnast performs it so well!
That's how the poet sees butterflies.
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Valsa George 10 August 2016

A butterfly and its aerial movements are seen through the imaginative eyes of a poet and a beautiful poem is born out of this observation!

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Kelly Kurt 09 August 2016

I am a butterfly lover too. Your poem shows the love you have for these delightful visitors to our flowers

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2016

The poet presents a panoramic view of beautiful activities enacted by a lovely little butterfly which has become so rare these days when green strips are being converted into concrete sheets. Thanks a lot. That's how a poet views the heaven.

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Khalid Saifullah 09 August 2016

A beautiful poem........................................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Twinkling of poetic eyes easily catch colourful lights sparked in nature and flying of butterflies. Tunes of beating rainbow through their wings come from petals to petals. What an amazing imagery is drawn really. Very interesting sharing this poem is....10

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M Asim Nehal 09 August 2016

Outstanding poem on colourful butterflies..indeed in olympic season we all tend to see everything with the lens of it and what a comparison you have done here......Amusing poem, Janab.10+++

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