Tuesday, November 3, 2009

A Flying Cow Comments

Rating: 3.1

Millie Moo Cow was grazing
in a field on day
when her fairy godmother
came to pay a visit to her.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2010

Gorgeous story David. Such a hoot! Your Millie Moo Cow is one cool dude and your final line - perfectly placed. This would make a fabulous children's picture book - including the poo! They'd love it. And so do I! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Kesav Easwaran 07 November 2009

Good narration David that ends with a moral told well...i find this piece very absorbing...thanks...10 Please read my piece- 'A Lesson To Learn'- if your time permits...find my 'crow' there with a moral to end...thanks

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Sandra Martyres 03 November 2009

That was really cool David.....your imagination knows no bounds....a flying cow punishing her tormentors with generous dollops of cow poo and then getting punished for her excesses......a neat tale with a moral 10++++

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Carol Gall 03 November 2009

david you are so funny flying cows i like the moral loll 10

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Patti Masterman 03 November 2009

Ha, I loved this imaginary foray into a world of flying cows and -oh my goodness- flying cow patties! Love the moral ending to your fable. (smile)

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