Friday, December 29, 2006

A Fly In The Ointment Comments

Rating: 5.0

She holds a toffee apple like a child
And he plays the mouth-organ mild.
They pass the time in the messy world
And they go on a ride in merry-go-round.
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nimal dunuhinga
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joey oo 08 January 2007

Very sad Nimal, I so hope this is your muse speaking...touching poem. Take care and Happy New Year. Joey

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Sandra Fowler 29 December 2006

Your sadness has given you an extraordinary poem. Wonderful write. I send you a smile to show you I approve. Always your friend, Sandra

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Max Reif 29 December 2006

well, sad. Sounds like some people you observed. Hey, I play the mouth organ...: -)

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