A Fly In Amber Comments

Ohhh, I like it. Great fusion of distant past and present and everything in between. Elegantly composed.

I actually feel as though I have stepped back in time, seen what the fly saw, from the beginning of time. Wonderful poem.

I love this poem. It's so beautifully crafted and detailed. There's a nice use of onomatopoeia. Thanks for keeping poetry real. Ciao. Lyrael

Detailed, descriptive, historical, original. Very enjoyable to read.

Wonderful poem. The last line with the green flash is particularly powerrful. Gershon Hepner

Peter i am a great collector of amber I have many pieces and I can really relate to this poem it is beautiful. I love the words and such meaning 10+ cheers sylvia

this poem transports you to another world, and beautifully chosen words too but the enjambments are somewhat arbitrary.

How brilliant can you get? Love 'the dance of continents' and the entire content of this poem humbled me. So original in its thinking.