A Fly Haiku Comments

Fairly powerful, the dual image and the realization that maybe, we aren't so removed.

Not a bad poem It is short and brief

Sweet observation - it's funny the things that insipre us. Hugs Anna xxx

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

hehe. Pete, this is a cool one. Peace.

A fantastic observation Peter, very nice indeed, I really like this one. Thankyou---Melvina

Brilliant poem. Well done, Peter. Terry

Yep! Peter. They do look as if they are doing just that don't they. Wonderful observation. Great Haiku. Well done indeed. Liked this lots. Love Ernestine XXX