Friday, August 21, 2015

A Flower's Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.0

More than two decades ago,
A cry was heard in the hospital
A soft loud cry; it made everyone happy.
An angel was born.
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Gladys Ombati
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Job Ombati 09 December 2022

A very realistic poem.

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Phanice Wamukota 26 August 2015

Beautiful write. A true poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 August 2015

How life is beautiful and cheerful-and can change, just Like the beauty of the flower! like these lines.. you began with the birth of the angel and the happiness then the death of the parent and the sadness. Then you spoke of hope and the joy of a goal achieved. thank you for your presentation. you are so young. please write and write. do not stop.

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Gladys Ombati 26 August 2015

Thanks a lot Dr. Tony for taking your time to read and for your thoughts. I will not stop. Appreciated!

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