I want to fall on you like rain
upon a wildflower
Opening new reason from you
Scaring all the old bees away from
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The opulent and sensual metaphors merge into the theme of the poem and make it an exquisite piece of art. Top score
Beautiful enchanting poem of love. " And in the meadow I bend down and kiss your petals wetly ""…… what can I say! ! !
This is a profoundly sweet piece, Robert...romantically exciting as well as scholastically engaging.
This poem is rated +18 but I'll be honest, it's the best I've seen. VERY NICE/REAL TALENT here! ! Please consider reading my poem 'Let's Grow up together'
What a magnificent piece of work! Captivating poetic expression... beautifully drafted! Great! !
I absolutely love this poem. It is an amazingly awesome poem. :)
Loved this, first time reading it...Just pulling you so that you can feel your roots leaving, to let you almost taste my world in the sky gah. love...
I want to fall on you like rain Good use of imagery. Sylva Oyema Uba
a wonderful romantic poem that pours out the essential ingredient of life? ...........beautifully written
Scaring all the old bees away from Pollinating your bed Scaring all the fake men off who Can only stand the sun So it’s just me and you in the Meadow Beautiful poem with these lines full of poetic richness and great imagery. Thanks poet for the lovely poem.
This is really a beautiful poem having stunning expression. Congratulation for this poem in top five hundreds.
Lovely romantic poem elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Heartiest Congrats on the member poem of the Day for this marvelous write.
I liked it. Congrats for the honours of POTD.....Some lines I picked were: I bend down and kiss your petals wetly Falling all over you Letting your pistil slip into my mouth Sucking off your honey, Almost plucking you
Sensational and romantic. Congrats for being the member's PoD.x
Amazing 😂