Wednesday, February 1, 2006

A Flower In The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.4

I want to fall on you like rain
upon a wildflower
Opening new reason from you
Scaring all the old bees away from
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Robert Rorabeck
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Craig Moses Uche 24 May 2023

Amazing 😂

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

The opulent and sensual metaphors merge into the theme of the poem and make it an exquisite piece of art. Top score

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Beautiful enchanting poem of love. " And in the meadow I bend down and kiss your petals wetly ""…… what can I say! ! !

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Hannington Mumo 10 February 2022

This is a profoundly sweet piece, Robert...romantically exciting as well as scholastically engaging.

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Craig Moses Uche 29 December 2021

This poem is rated +18 but I'll be honest, it's the best I've seen. VERY NICE/REAL TALENT here! ! Please consider reading my poem 'Let's Grow up together'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2021

What a magnificent piece of work! Captivating poetic expression... beautifully drafted! Great! !

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Maria Mitea 26 January 2021

Great writing, Robert!

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Sarah Shahzad 21 December 2019

I absolutely love this poem. It is an amazingly awesome poem. :)

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Indira Rice Donegan 18 June 2018

Loved this, first time reading it...Just pulling you so that you can feel your roots leaving, to let you almost taste my world in the sky gah. love...

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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 April 2018

I want to fall on you like rain Good use of imagery. Sylva Oyema Uba

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A wonderful cinematic poem...

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sasmitarani nayak 13 January 2018

wonderful poem

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Tom Allport 29 September 2017

a wonderful romantic poem that pours out the essential ingredient of life? ...........beautifully written

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Scaring all the old bees away from Pollinating your bed Scaring all the fake men off who Can only stand the sun So it’s just me and you in the Meadow Beautiful poem with these lines full of poetic richness and great imagery. Thanks poet for the lovely poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

This is really a beautiful poem having stunning expression. Congratulation for this poem in top five hundreds.

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Rebecca Lyle 19 April 2017

Your writing is amazing, really :)

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Chinedu Dike 04 February 2017

Lovely romantic poem elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 October 2016

Heartiest Congrats on the member poem of the Day for this marvelous write.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2016

I liked it. Congrats for the honours of POTD.....Some lines I picked were: I bend down and kiss your petals wetly Falling all over you Letting your pistil slip into my mouth Sucking off your honey, Almost plucking you

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 22 October 2016

Sensational and romantic. Congrats for being the member's PoD.x

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