Oceans are never silent, likewise the sky.
The waves whisper their secrets, embracing each other.
And they are separated, never to meet again.
But, I always see a flower in the ocean.
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This poem touched me. This is pure and pristine, itself like a flower. 'The waves whisper their secrets, embracing each other.' - Who else other than a poet can hear this whisper? '...........a flower in the ocean, only I could see.' - A true poet indeed! The note too is poetic. It touches deep... Keep gazing at the shattering waves, even if those raise a wave or two deep in your heart. Remembrance of sad stories too gives a touch of sweetness and purity. Our sweetest songs are those.... You know!
Thank-you so much for your beautiful comments, carrying so much depth. You say, only a poet can hear the whisper of the waves, true! I am so glad that you liked my poetry.
Awwwww: (I can understand... but sadness is never permanent, I hope and pray to ALLAH that you get immeasurable bliss for your entire life! ameen. Keep up writing poems, am inspired by you!
The true feelings of a poet that a flower can be seen in the ocean. Only the poets can visualise it through their heart.