Thursday, October 8, 2015

A Flower In The Charlotine Times Comments

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She lay there
like a wilted flower
unrecognizable, as the person I'd known
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Nika McGuin
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Daniel Brick 24 October 2015

Who among us has not had such feelings - if only I had known - if only I had visited more often - if only.... Your poem speaks for all of us. But I don't want to dwell on the IF ONLY theme. The time we DID spend with all of THEM in our many lives, was time well-spent and fulfilled the bond we have with aged relatives. The fact that you wrote this poem and I relate to it speaks eloquently of family ties.

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