A Flower For You..... Comments

I just remember one of our legends in which Sri Krishna brings a flower called 'PARIJATHA' and gives to his beloved wife Rukmini.The same antic spirit and glowry is there in this beautiful poem. Brother, thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. I will surely give 10+ marks.

i just love the theme of your poem.... And very well crafted and perfect use of words.

With an ikebana of TEN Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

dear poet, i am that flower..................

'i may not be the bird that flies in the highest sky, just let my beautiful wings spread and bring you to end, leaving you with no pain as you stay beneath....' good lines expressive poetic...thanks Anto...10

'Hold on the flowers and smell the fragrance while you’re on the way, its spell like fairy tale, yet! live it and face reality, for the flower i give will hold you to the end..' These lines bring your poem to higher realms of feeling and wisdom. Thanks for sharing and God bless. A.

this is so beautiful dear friend..this is great..grace

Hold on the flowers and smell the fragrance while you’re on the way, its spell like fairy tale, yet! live it and face reality, for the flower i give will hold you to the end; the humid beginning of flowering bloom’s in the air beautiful representation frim inner depth and good feeling abt it.. i liked it most...10 read mine'flower for u' miss i miss and mary to marry along with final adieu, Jackson

filled with much passion, desire and love. 10

a passionate one...a simile of love offered disguise in a flower...splendid poem....10

a fine write for the loved one....... see my 10 +++