A Flower For You Comments

Sad poem, yet well-written. A lot of compassion displayed. Thanks for sharing and also CONGRATS. Well-deserved 'poem of the day'!

Poemhunter.com Beautiful poem. Rightly ruled as 'the poem of the day'. During the course of life, we, sometimes, feel robbed of our prized possessions. Then, we rise and make an effort to regain our composure.

A beautiful poem of loss and longing Congratulations on your poem being named poem of the day

very sad indeed...the scenes created in this poem may hauntingly touch the reader's hearts......

Swimming in the sea of sadness. Yet rich in creativity!

Nothing is Permanent; the crazy pendulum of time holds this truth in fast flowing rivers budding flowers reach from the earth to touch the heavens, their scent tangling in threads of dark clouds then snaking back seeking the ground where minds wonder along winding roads. with ideas in my head, I get up from my desk, walk outside to check the sky; it’s fine.

Very nice. I could feel your torture and concern for her...

Light hearted write with deep intent! Well done.; D

Touhing and tender yet rabid and real as the beauty of the flower is contrasted with the condition of the recipiant. Well done my friend.

Love and flower go very well and you’ve made it. Ten+ [with smiling flowers] Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

i hand this flower. Rachel Ann Butler

Giving her a flower to get her to realise her true self, and understand her true feelings. Touching.

oh... i love that last stanza! ! ! ! ! very sweet and touching.

hand this flower for you the smell may make you return from day one when you were real when you still feel.... beautiful feeling if some one offers u the flower.. great joy....10 u read mine un der same heading'flowers for u' when i was discharged from hospital and doctor send me flowers onrecovery... pse read it

''i hand this flower for you the smell may make you return from day one when you were real when you still feel'' this symbolic lyric poem prove that we need to have feelings for being existent, we need emotions for feelings, a great idea.....10++

Very lovely poem...

oh....sir...loved this poem....the sincerity of this poem is heart-wrenching.... thank you very much.

a hearfelt poetic flower of love and sympathy to one who suffers without knowing what, from one who suffers from the knowledge of that...thanks a lot for sharing your feelings, Anto...10

I like this poem..alot. It gets a 10 from me!

This emotional composition touches, my 10 for it.