In the morning breezes
When the air almost freezes
Flowers blossom easily
Dew covered and wet
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You are a wonderful writer. Such great use of words, you are like a painter. your keyboard your canvas. excellent.
agree with Pat, lovely poem, lovely imagery and off course lovely words
So lovely poem about flowers wilting under the scorching heat. Very observant of nature and its effects on plants. The sun has no mercy on those beautiful petals. Enjoyed.
It's a lovely poem. I like the articulation and insight of the piece. It's a poem all and sundry can relate to, as it captured the scenario very well. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.