Tuesday, January 8, 2008

A Flower Blooms In The Railroad Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lost my return ticket but the train won't delay for me
And it's already departed in time.
We met on the platform and she invited me to her hideous world.
She goes out early in the morning and comes back late at night
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

You manage to fit so many images into such a small vase in this painfully compassionate poem. Beautiful work. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 08 January 2008

Two people who have definately lost their way.A mood of overwhelming sadness is apparent in every line of this touching write. Take care. Warm regards Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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