Sunday, June 30, 2019

A Flower Comments

Rating: 4.8

When a flower blooms in the garden
Bees rush to it to take essence and honey
Sitting on the petals they swing and play
When the wind blows and it is sunny
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Chuy Amante 23 August 2020

wonderfully painted in my mind line 10 " go" should perhaps be " goes" so says my native ear

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2020

A day in the life of a flower has been portrayed beautifully. Its emotional appeal stays with the reader long after he has read the poem. Thanks.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 30 June 2019

Reality in life, very aptly depicted using a true naura event as a simile. Thanks for the philosophical poem.

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