A beautiful Flower is growing here
In the sunny, and neat, and tidy place.
Its leaves and petals seem fine and clear.
I dream to pick it gently and embrace.
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Such a lovely picture you have painted Jolanta, great imagery with a beautiful flow of words down the page. Thanks for sharing your vision warm wishes Jon
the last line was the best...a short poem...but left a long impression
A wonderful poem, love the style and the aim becomes clear, well done, love duncan X
nice poem..love the use of words...esp..teh end..that it seduces u... preets
....a fine composition indeed.....10