Friday, May 5, 2006

A Flower Comments

Rating: 4.5

A beautiful Flower is growing here
In the sunny, and neat, and tidy place.
Its leaves and petals seem fine and clear.
I dream to pick it gently and embrace.
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Jolanta Gradowicz
COMMENTS
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2008

....a fine composition indeed.....10

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~ Jon London ~ 26 May 2008

Such a lovely picture you have painted Jolanta, great imagery with a beautiful flow of words down the page. Thanks for sharing your vision warm wishes Jon

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 April 2008

beautiful, lovely poem thanks for sharing

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Nalini Hebbar 22 June 2006

the last line was the best...a short poem...but left a long impression

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Duncan Wyllie 13 May 2006

A wonderful poem, love the style and the aim becomes clear, well done, love duncan X

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Preeti - is here! 07 May 2006

nice poem..love the use of words...esp..teh end..that it seduces u... preets

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