A Floating Flower Comments

A great poem that immediately touches the heart.

What a sharp painful knife it is – Piercing me from both ends! I too feel the pain, Amitava! Words which have sprung from a bleeding heart! Quite moving!

Amitava, a brilliant and heart piercing poem, your love for Rakhee has no bounds, it has an everlasting quality that will no longer bring you peace since she is gone. You have explained it explicitly and precisely, I can feel your broken heart in mind as it breaks into a million pieces. Your words have gone beyond sorrow and taken me with them. There is such heart rending beauty in the sorrow of true love lost forever through death. Your best poem ever, it is priceless, little one! ! Thank you, RoseAnn

Amitava, a brilliant and heart piercing poem, your love for Rakhee has no bounds, it has an everlasting quality that will no longer bring you peace since she has gone. You have explained it explicitly and precisely, I can feel your broken heart as it breaks mine also into a million pieces, your words have gone beyond sorrow and taken me with them. There is such heart rending beauty in the sorrow of true love lost forever through death. Your best poem ever, it is priceless, little one! RoseAnn

Neither you appear to me Nor you allow me to forget, What a sharp painful knife it is – Piercing me from both ends! ...... Isn't the the symbol of true love? It is like a knife that pierces a person both sides. Great imagination. Thrilling phraseology. A lovely poem I like most. Many thanks.