A Floating Cloud Comments

NOW i see i left messages 3 years ago, but had not put in MyPoemList. hmm? now i have. bri :)

this i like quite a bit. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

this i like quite a bit. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

There all is tranquil all is calm..a master piece

Always pulling me with some magical energy Yet always beyond my reach..........................this is a good way to describe my feelings about some women i've known.

oh! i see you have within on this page. ok, Savita, i've now read it about four times and i like it more now that i'm not stopping and pondering or looking for 'mistakes'! ! ! i liked especially the lines Akhtar mentions in his comment. let me know about baron/barren and i'll get this into the Section A of September 2016's Showcase for PH poets. :) bri

The substratum of life It holds me, cuddles me, guides me through Always pulling me with some magical energy Yet always beyond my reach. That should remain beyond the reach, because that is the destination where at the journey is finished. A lovely write.

beautiful poem i love the words and imagery enjoyed...

very beautifully put..lovely read.. enjoyed!

Your writing is magical, it creates a place so deep within the heart and soul, a feeling of letting go and embracing this precious moment, one with the cloud, oh, you know I always feel like that as I am the could. Thank you my dear friend for your beautiful poem. Namaste.