A Float... Comments

how well you have captured the essence of life..brilliant

Says so much in so few lines, great poem x

You have packed such a lovely message into these 4 lines. Beautiful!

profound thoughts in four lines simply sublime!

Great philosophy! Very much sounds like right from our UPANISHADS.......

i love this Kesav! ....and it's up to us what direction to paddle.....

Very sensible and powerful write, my friend. Very well done as always! : -)

amidst the current and shores we float...balance and float...a lot said in those four lines.....10 +

Short, sweet and powerful. Long back I have written a similar essay in hindi depicting life as a river with joy and sorrow as its two shores.... and there is a small poetry with a similar feel, which I shall post soon. Thanks. Vanita.

'In between floats, life barge to and fro' you are an utter philosopher.

conflict of good and evil well defined here sir..nice poetic expressions said in a very poetic manner...A++

Ah, Kesav, Should we be floating always? We need rest and repair...which we have been doing for centuries. And so on sullied shores, the rest turns to warfare..with bouts of uneasy peace. Tranquility is just a living dream.. Lets live on...This poem of yours is...very picturesque to say the least... Cheers. Subroto

Poetic beauty in brief. All said about the sweet and sour of life. Thank you for the nice feast. CP

Truly, I agree! With this amazing poem..life have been ultimately described... Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem!

Simply beautifull.....10 from me..

Wonderful sir....very simply put.....that which is so difficult to express.......thank you.

Your pieces do always make sense...True, in life's quest we always come in circles, to and from...beginning and end...etc. In between there should be a constant balance inorder to attain peace and harmony in this human world...I bow down to you, sir. Maestro...excelente!

true... this feeling of been caught in the middle is disgusting... nicely captured emotions... : D

So very very true with no to much current in between. 10

how true how true..........and iam having sea sickness actually...haha