A Flight Into Orbit: Comments

PHASE ANGLE HAS EXCEEDED CAPACITY - that's a great sentence! But since I'm not familiar with PHRASE ANGEL, I don't get the point. But I like the science element in your poem. It seems to me you are contrasting secular knowledge that is science with religious knowledge through revelation in scriptures, but neither source gives us human a total understanding of the cosmos. Especially the last stanza shows this ultimate mystery of things. As for reconciling the Old and New Testaments - I once when much younger tried to do that and innocently set about it. I was frustrated in a short time. You have a much better goal: the Kaballah and Laitman. The mystic path will fly over (the orbit theme!) the problems I faced, and land in a fully restored Garden!