A Flight
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A colorful kite was I
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this is a lovely stirring poem a good use of metaphors A good read much enjoyed
An insightful poem that vouchsafes the cause of intense love... Here is my 10 for you Sir.
Kite is no more in sight Love thread is winded up on wheel, The symphony is broken An utter silence ….. all around! ! . A thoughtful and impressive poem on life, with amazing last stanza.
Amitava, another beautiful tribute to Rakhee. Totally love how you compare yourself with the kite, in love you were as free as a kite. When losing your love, being broken and falling into an utter silence. Very poignant poem, imagery is magnificent, rhythm flowing. Another masterpiece to your name. I give you a 10. Thank you.
Such beautiful and loving poem. A very lovely tribute. In silence she is watching over you.
the life and the kites are compared beautifully..Thank you for sharing..
A Wonderful poem from heart, speaking the depth of intense love for your beloved. A lovely tribute. Loved reading it.