Wednesday, September 17, 2014

A Flight Comments

Rating: 4.9

A Flight
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A colorful kite was I
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Amitava Sur
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Geetha Jayakumar 09 October 2014

A Wonderful poem from heart, speaking the depth of intense love for your beloved. A lovely tribute. Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2014

this is a lovely stirring poem a good use of metaphors A good read much enjoyed

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Dinesan Madathil 20 September 2014

An insightful poem that vouchsafes the cause of intense love... Here is my 10 for you Sir.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 September 2014

Kite is no more in sight Love thread is winded up on wheel, The symphony is broken An utter silence ….. all around! ! . A thoughtful and impressive poem on life, with amazing last stanza.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2014

Amitava, another beautiful tribute to Rakhee. Totally love how you compare yourself with the kite, in love you were as free as a kite. When losing your love, being broken and falling into an utter silence. Very poignant poem, imagery is magnificent, rhythm flowing. Another masterpiece to your name. I give you a 10. Thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 17 September 2014

Such beautiful and loving poem. A very lovely tribute. In silence she is watching over you.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2014

the life and the kites are compared beautifully..Thank you for sharing..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2014

Kati patang...Uncontrolled kite ...lovely

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