Tuesday, July 28, 2009

A Flickering Candle Comments

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With a flickering candle,
she walks the streets alone
looking for her lover
who failed to come home.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2010

What a pensive little piece, you have penned here, David. I wondered what inspired it? Sounds like a story from the past, handed down over generations - like Clementine. I like the way you leave the reader wondering - and hoping for a happy ending. Great piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Carol Gall 28 July 2009

maybe shes a spirit? good write

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