Saturday, July 4, 2009

# # A Flicker Comments

Rating: 3.3

a feeling i have
all of us have
which binds us
to the universe
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Pandian Angelina 14 July 2009

'so low in morale no blame on the god ever the goodness flicker should survive any storm ever' This feeling inside That goodness Should not be blown out Whatever be the storm The strength not to blame God Both will help tide over Whatever be the cause And the Flicker will Always be a Torch! Angel

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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

wonderful simile: ''a feeling i have all of us have which binds us to the universe it is like the green in the leaf all the colors on the flower'' embedded in a nice lyric poem..10+++ from me

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 July 2009

very wonderful thoughts....a soul-searching piece we all flicker.... but still we don't give up..we continue to light the way....continue to live... we maybe unsteady sometimes but....we still able to stand still... really a great piece you have shared with us Sam.... for us to reflect on life and on our being.... thanks for sharing....i love this... lovelots, maia

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Bob Blackwell 10 July 2009

Samanyan, my flicker would be a freedom song, freedom to soar, to fly to distant lands, but then I am sure it bring me back to deal with the everyday problems of living. Facing life head on is the only way. Lovely poem. Bob 10+

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Vidi Writes 07 July 2009

Live life, on a 'each day' basis Never know, when the water drifts under the foot Enormous truth, enlarged life Past never repeats, present can't be snatched Future can't be lived. The Flicker... to search... Before that... each day should have held something to search. This poem, read with caution, can be a beacon to youngsters.

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Catrina Heart 07 July 2009

the goodness flicker should survive any storm ever A FLICKER WITH WHICH I SHOULD SEARCH ALL..... fabulous end lines....Our hearts have wings that flicker flutter into the vast beautiful heavens...

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Sandra Fowler 07 July 2009

Your 'goodness flicker' will certainly survive every storm. Strength for the journey, my friend. And praise for your beautiful poem. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 06 July 2009

'....all the feathers in my wings have withered now....' featherless wings...no use in flying...poignant write...thanks

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~ Jon London ~ 05 July 2009

Our hearts are forever with you dear brother......a fine piece bro....continue to to explore....we'll be with you....and know that the Lord...is with us all.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 05 July 2009

There are moments when a flicker may arise to every human life, but he or she remains not affected thereby, having developed a strong taste for goodness, as mentioned here.

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Surya . 05 July 2009

arief feeling only. do not worry. we are with you. nicely expressed voted10 surya

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Priyanka Bhowmick 04 July 2009

a good thought.. well described in a flicker..

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Raj Arumugam 04 July 2009

we are all one, Samanyan...Very true...

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Sandra Martyres 04 July 2009

A Flicker.......has surely keep my thoughts flickering - great write Samanyan

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Ency Bearis 04 July 2009

well expressed thoughts....nice

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Louis Rams 04 July 2009

like a flicker of light, it set your thoughts on fire to brighten all around. good write a ten

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rago rago 04 July 2009

very nice to read flcker.............fine write ............

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Carol Gall 04 July 2009

it starts with a flicker great write

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