Thursday, August 9, 2007

A Fleeting Moment Of Family Comments

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The table is laid,
A place for me.
This is my family.
Yet being all together is
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Susan Ash
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Ying Escalona 09 August 2007

family...poetry..they are like jigsaw puzzles..and poets are the best to perform its arrangement...like parents do

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Coll B. Lue 09 August 2007

Excellent theme and words....I like the way you've described the family as a jigsaw puzzle which when together fits in all the right places and then the idea that the self is not actually 'there' but lost. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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