I can see a pail of moon
Spilled over your head
Long rivulets of moonlight dripping
Touching the terra firma of your face
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most nights sneak that way, rehan...i enjoyed reading this posting of urs...certain unique expression like moon spilling over the head, a pendant lost in the crevice of the sofa to name a few...one needs an extrordinary eye to make poetry out of these taken for granted experiences...
Rehan.. so softly softly for you... and your homeland in chaos again... aroha & to yours...10derly Deana xx
What a great idea of the pail of moon slipping over their head. Great work with creative imagery!