Sunday, October 2, 2005

A Flame For The Moth Comments

Rating: 3.5

the dance has started
as the moth draws itself.
flutter around my heat...
move closer to that which you desire
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Hot, metaphorical

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

hi eila I love this one very expressive Poems that are expressing ones true heart feelings are best in my view I have a couple I think you would like Very shakespearan in Nature 'the dance' and 'Pleasures of thy heart' Enjoy them Namaste Peter

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Uriah Hamilton 03 October 2005

It might be a lovely warm feeling before the final burn.

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