It was after a while
You had a new bicycle
Ocean blue with tri-colors stripes
Six speeds and a gear pipe
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Hello Yusof: A wonderful poem with the flavor of Emily Dickenson, an American poet whom I love dearly. I often use her works in my poetry class at Hagerstown Community College. This one has whimsical feeling but well constructed. You write very well. Of course I want you to read some of mine. Adeline Foster
a real love with a feel of life Ocean blue bicycle You come with a smile Spend time in my cubicle With your usual style Smooth talking We study
Wonderful words. From one cyclist to another, Bravo.