Sunday, February 10, 2008

A Five Miles Turn Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was after a while
You had a new bicycle
Ocean blue with tri-colors stripes
Six speeds and a gear pipe
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Wonderful words. From one cyclist to another, Bravo.

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Chitra - 25 August 2008

a novel write! enjoyed it

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Adeline Foster 21 August 2008

Hello Yusof: A wonderful poem with the flavor of Emily Dickenson, an American poet whom I love dearly. I often use her works in my poetry class at Hagerstown Community College. This one has whimsical feeling but well constructed. You write very well. Of course I want you to read some of mine. Adeline Foster

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Kee Thampi 19 March 2008

a real love with a feel of life Ocean blue bicycle You come with a smile Spend time in my cubicle With your usual style Smooth talking We study

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