Friday, June 17, 2011

A Fishy Tale Comments

Rating: 4.7

I saw you twice the other day
Stirring passion anew
It's easy saying just move on
Less easier to do
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Vanessa Hughes
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Sol Lucero 10 May 2025

I had to make an account just to comment this because it was just so perfect and to relatable to me, thank you so much Vanessa.

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Beautiful. " On the face of it, a small fish But you took over my whole sea ", great way to express…

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Bri Edwards 21 May 2017

i've had this in MyPoemList for years. now it is time to put into my June 2017's showcase on my PH site. let me know if you object. This June showcase is open to just females. July shall be for male poets only (as best as i know!) . this is my first try at splitting genders for monthly showcases. thanks. bri :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 November 2016

A great poem with torrents of emotions and rich in rhyme and rhythm. Heartiest Congrats on it's member poem of the Day.

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Bernard Snyder 05 November 2016

Great poem. Nice rhyme scheme as well Vanessa. Well deserved to be chosen as 'poem of the day'! Congrats!

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Sarah Persson 05 November 2016

A lovely poem of love lost, congratulations on poem of the day. A very sweet piece.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 November 2016

... a small fish But you took over my whole sea Nice spell from love affected.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 November 2016

Indecisive minds, swing and sway this way that way without being able to settle down. Such minds have many things, fishy or otherwise, to say. Its nicely said and wonderfully presented. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Lebo Chepape 05 November 2016

Very catchy*! pun intended lol. its awesome!

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Lebo Chepape 05 November 2016

Very catchy! pun intended lol

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Mizzy ........ 05 November 2016

I hear you and feel you Vanessa......Very nicely written piece!

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Clarence Prince 05 November 2016

It sounds like real strong love for someone! A lovely love poem, I'll say! Thanks for sharing, Vanessa!

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Tom Billsborough 05 November 2016

Yes, moving on is never easy. Some loves you never forget. A fine poem, Vanessa.

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Rajnish Manga 05 November 2016

It's easy saying just move on Less easier to do.... / Quite a lovely poem where the passion and the sentiments are nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on being the Poet of the Day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2016

Anew! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2016

On the face of it, a small fish But you took over my whole sea Never before had I gone fishing It was all so new to me - - - - - - - - - - A small fish takes over the whole sea- - - - - A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 05 November 2016

Congratulations, Vanessa! Poem of the day for you! My favorite verse is this one: I've always said to others There's plenty more fish in the sea But some days it makes no difference How many fish there be

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Indira Renganathan 05 November 2016

Of all..that one small fish... finally the one stirring so much passion and fervor in you... will be for ever alive in this poem too...good metaphorical work...great- 10

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 January 2015

davvero carina la tua poesia, Vanessa. 'A Fishy tale' is a witty title for your nicely put composition. Thanks for sharing

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Brian Jani 17 May 2014

Vanessa Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done

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