A Fishy Tale Comments

I had to make an account just to comment this because it was just so perfect and to relatable to me, thank you so much Vanessa.

Beautiful. " On the face of it, a small fish But you took over my whole sea ", great way to express…

i've had this in MyPoemList for years. now it is time to put into my June 2017's showcase on my PH site. let me know if you object. This June showcase is open to just females. July shall be for male poets only (as best as i know!) . this is my first try at splitting genders for monthly showcases. thanks. bri :)

A great poem with torrents of emotions and rich in rhyme and rhythm. Heartiest Congrats on it's member poem of the Day.

Great poem. Nice rhyme scheme as well Vanessa. Well deserved to be chosen as 'poem of the day'! Congrats!

A lovely poem of love lost, congratulations on poem of the day. A very sweet piece.

... a small fish But you took over my whole sea Nice spell from love affected.

Indecisive minds, swing and sway this way that way without being able to settle down. Such minds have many things, fishy or otherwise, to say. Its nicely said and wonderfully presented. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

Very catchy*! pun intended lol. its awesome!

Very catchy! pun intended lol

I hear you and feel you Vanessa......Very nicely written piece!

It sounds like real strong love for someone! A lovely love poem, I'll say! Thanks for sharing, Vanessa!

Yes, moving on is never easy. Some loves you never forget. A fine poem, Vanessa.

It's easy saying just move on Less easier to do.... / Quite a lovely poem where the passion and the sentiments are nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on being the Poet of the Day.

Anew! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

On the face of it, a small fish But you took over my whole sea Never before had I gone fishing It was all so new to me - - - - - - - - - - A small fish takes over the whole sea- - - - - A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

Congratulations, Vanessa! Poem of the day for you! My favorite verse is this one: I've always said to others There's plenty more fish in the sea But some days it makes no difference How many fish there be

Of all..that one small fish... finally the one stirring so much passion and fervor in you... will be for ever alive in this poem too...good metaphorical work...great- 10

davvero carina la tua poesia, Vanessa. 'A Fishy tale' is a witty title for your nicely put composition. Thanks for sharing

Vanessa Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done